Hi Kalani. Hope you have been enjoying some of that hot chocolate or are in front of that hot fire that you described in your memory poem. Been a bit BRRRRR over the last couple of days.
You did a great job of showing not telling with your Winter poem. I could tell from your descriptive writing that it was about Winter. I think that your choice of graphic to illustrate your poem is appropriate and adds to the mood of the poem. It made me feel cold just looking at it.
Winter.
ReplyDeleteHi Kalani.
ReplyDeleteHope you have been enjoying some of that hot chocolate or are in front of that hot fire that you described in your memory poem. Been a bit BRRRRR over the last couple of days.
Kia ora Kalani,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job of showing not telling with your Winter poem. I could tell from your descriptive writing that it was about Winter. I think that your choice of graphic to illustrate your poem is appropriate and adds to the mood of the poem. It made me feel cold just looking at it.
I hope you are staying warm and safe at home.
See you again soon,
Mrs Gully