Friday 8 June 2018

The one and only Ivan

The one and only ivan is a silverback gorilla. The gorilla has small round brown and golden eyes.His feet were as heavy as a truck full of bricks.Massive hairy feet grips the tree

as he climbs the tree. Thick and black lips form a humongous smile showing giant fluffy yellow teeth. The gorilla is a silverback gorilla, the most powerful of them all. He is giant.
walit we are learing to write a paragraph to create a picture in the readers mind

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4 comments:

  1. Unknown16 August 2018 at 10:52

    Kia Ora Kalani. Nicky here from T2.

    Amazing descriptive writing and a good topic to do it on.
    It was a pleasure to read and I cant wait to see more!

    Great work Kalani keep it up!!

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  3. Unknown6 September 2018 at 12:48

    Hello Kalani
    It's Alex here from T3, good job writing this paragraph about the book the one and only Ivan. I've seen this book in the library, maybe one day I'll read it. Did you enjoy this book?

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  4. Unknown7 September 2018 at 14:26

    Kia Ora kalani its Elijah from m2 Amazing descriptive writing and a good topic to do it on.
    It was a pleasure to read and I cant wait to see more

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