Friday, 22 March 2019

Colour Poem

Walt: To write a poem that creates a picture in
the reader's mind using precise adjectives and nouns.


  
This week we wrote colour poems.
I enjoyed doing this activity because
we got to choose our own colour
and it was something new.

Here is my poem:

Arctic blue is biting cold like the water at the base of the Hokitika gorge.


Arctic blue is crisp like the air on a clear winters day.

Arctic blue is the shimmering scale of a bluefin tuna.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Kalani, I love the descriptive colour poem you wrote with Harris. You picked some great language to describe your colour which really did help the readers from a picture in their mind. I especially like your first phrase as the Hokitika Gorge water is definitely Arctic Blue and freezing!

    ReplyDelete

Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.